Dialogue

What does it mean to critique a story?
I entered a competition. I wasn't overly pleased with the story I submitted. Neither were the judges. Actually, that's not fair. One was enthusiastic. The other two sort of liked it, I think? All three had comments to make about it. I was happy to receive their feedback.
By Rachel Deemingabout a year ago in Critique
A Night at Blockbuster
--- A Night at Blockbuster: What We’ve Gained and Lost It’s Friday night, and the routine is as comforting as the movies we’re about to pick. My mom, my brothers, and I pile into the car, excitement buzzing in the air. We’re heading to Blockbuster. Tonight is movie and game night. It’s a tradition, a ritual, one that requires careful deliberation and a little negotiation.
By K-jayabout a year ago in Critique
Twin Peaks" and David Lynch: Redefining American Television
David Lynch, the legendary filmmaker who passed away in 2025 at the age of 78, was a master of weaving beauty and terror into unforgettable stories. His groundbreaking television series, Twin Peaks, remains one of the most iconic and uniquely American works in TV history. By blending mystery, surrealism, and small-town charm, Lynch created a show that explored the light and darkness of the American experience in a way no other series had.
By AB Cabout a year ago in Critique
Watching The Matrix For The First Time in 2024
So, I finally watched The Matrix movies, all four of them, including the newest one, for the very first time at the end of last year.
By Sandra Afonsoabout a year ago in Critique
“Conspiracy Theories: Labyrinths of Shadows and the Poetry of Paranoia”
There is something profoundly human about the allure of conspiracy theories. They arise not simply as explanations for chaos, but as manifestations of our deepest anxieties and desires. They speak to a part of us that is both terrified of the unknown and irresistibly drawn to it, yearning to impose meaning on an existence that often seems incomprehensible.
By Nazia Syedabout a year ago in Critique
Trump Makes History: The First Former President Sentenced for a Felony
In an unprecedented moment in American history, former President Donald Trump became the first ex-president to be sentenced for a felony. The court proceedings, held on a quiet Friday morning, concluded with a sentence that left many stunned: unconditional discharge, which carries no punishment. This legal milestone underscores the unique intersection of power, privilege, and accountability in the life of one of the most polarizing figures in modern politics.
By mureed hussainabout a year ago in Critique
The Attributes of God
The Attributes of God: An Invitation to Awe Imagine the Creator of the universe—the One who spoke stars into existence and shaped the fabric of time—reaching out to reveal Himself to you. This is the God we worship: perfect, holy, and beyond human comprehension, yet profoundly personal and lovingly near. His attributes are not only a testament to His divine majesty but also a gift to us, a glimpse into the heart of a God who longs to be known.
By K-jayabout a year ago in Critique
Unlocking Africa’s Potential: The Path to Industrialisation, Innovation, and Global Leadership - By godInk
Unlocking Africa’s Potential: The Path to Industrialization, Innovation, and Global Leadership - By godInk Addressing the Leadership Crisis, Harnessing Intellectual Capital, and Leveraging Natural Resources to Propel Africa into a New Era of Sustainable Development
By JaygodInk about a year ago in Critique
Living in the Shadow of TV Screens
Television has always been more than a source of entertainment. It’s a cultural force, shaping how we perceive love, family, and success. From the chaotic yet endearing Bundys in Married with Children to the affluent, polished Banks family in The Fresh Prince of Bel-Air, TV shows offer models of life that are either aspirational or cautionary. These fictional narratives influence our choices, aspirations, and even our sense of identity, often more than we realize.
By K-jayabout a year ago in Critique
A Personal Reflection on Forrest Gump
“Life is Like a Box of Chocolates” The movie starts with Forrest (played by Tom Hanks) sitting on a bench, holding a box of chocolates, and telling a stranger, “My mama always said, life was like a box of chocolates. You never know what you’re gonna get.” This line is so simple, yet it says so much about life. Forrest’s story, from his childhood struggles with leg braces to becoming a war hero, shrimp boat captain, and even a running sensation, is proof of this.
By Adarsh Kumar Singhabout a year ago in Critique
"The Universal Echo
In the vast expanse of existence, every person is both a universe and a grain of sand, unique and indistinguishable. The delicate weave of human experience threads itself through the infinite tapestry of life, where no single thread stands out more than another. Each life, in its complexity, is a reflection of countless others—beyond personal narratives, beyond individual triumphs or failures. We are all the same; we are all different.
By K-jayabout a year ago in Critique
You Are the Brand: How Writers Can Stand Out in a Crowded Market
Imagine walking into an online store to make a purchase. It could be anything—clothing, electronics, or home decor. Do you expect to see just one product? Of course not. Instead, you're presented with a variety of options, each with different brand names, reviews, and price points. You take your time, compare features, and ultimately choose what aligns with your budget and expectations.
By joyabout a year ago in Critique