Sweat streams off my skin
As my body releases
What’s no longer mine
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One cocoon twitches; my screaming must have disturbed it. It’s followed by a sound like the shaking of a cobra’s tail. A dry rattle sends a shiver down my spine. The rest of the cocoons respond the same way, as if communicating with one another; the cave fills with rattling. The glow becomes stronger as they vibrate and bathes the cave floor in an eerie blue light.
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Whoaaaa, this was so freaking deep! Awesomeeee Haiku!
I've never really liked saunas. But the idea of sweat as releasing that which is no longer mine, I like that. A lot.
Oh yes. So good! Physical/mental sweat. Great haiku! 💫💞
Great haiku