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Smoke

Surreal Poetry

By Bernard AquilinaPublished 8 years ago 1 min read

The burning tree demanding forth:

Skin the kings

As the spiral of roaches

Awaken the teeth of steel

Thy Holy Child

My kin together

Festive consummation

Of space and time

Joyous is thy event

One spark commences

The ascension and transfiguration

Of one pure soul that

Seeks in the mind

To open the eye

And see all of the sides of the moon

Darkness enlightened

Perfect is the moment

Worries set at sail

Nothing to matter when dissolved

And like Alice though the looking glass

A new place anew to us forth

As blessed with knowledge

Is bestowed upon the wake

Of a novel sense

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  • John Doe2 months ago

    This feels like you swallowed a fantasy dictionary and tried to burp out enlightenment. “Skin the kings,” “holy child,” “ascension,” “all sides of the moon” it’s like you’re auditioning to be the final boss of a philosophy-themed video game. Maximum cosmic drama, zero concrete meaning. It reads less like divine revelation and more like someone desperately trying to sound profound while aggressively refusing to say anything clear. Don't quit your job, pal!

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