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Challenge entry for the Haiku of Now challenge
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Cold screens flicker once
Black bars settle over names
Air hums, unmoving
About the Creator
Sara Wilson
I love Ugly Things.
I try and be active AND interactive.
I write... whatever I feel.
Sometimes it's happy.. sometimes it isn't. But it's real. And it's me.
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Comments (31)
Congratulations, Sara❣ I agree with Lamar; you achieved a lot in only three lines, and that last one is simply outstanding.👏🌹
Congratulations on your win! 🎉I was so happy to see your name on top.
Omg! So. Very. Now. Biggest congrats on your win ✨✨💖💖
Wow!!! I don't know how you achieved so much in three lines, three effective lines especially the last. Super congrats to you, Sara! Well-deserved!!!!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Fantastic haiku! Congratulations on your win!
Made me angry in a good way. Love it. Congrats.
Congratulations!
Excellent and accurate This world is such a dystopia Nicely done and congrats on the win! Well earned :)
Nice, congrats on the win!
congratulations
Huge congratulations, Sara!
Congratulations!
Yay, Sara! So excited for you! This is a fantastic haiku—you are very deserving of a win! Celebrating with you!!! 💫🩷💫
Congrats Sara, very well done!
Congratulations, Sara! This is a great and timely haiku, and a well-deserved win.
Yesss! A proper congratulations as well! So happy for you! 🎉
Congratulations!!! Very powerful!!
I love how you lasered in on a single moment that defines our collective experience. Congratulations!
Rock on, Sara! Timely and complete.
Amazing Win! Congratulations
Congratulations on your win 🏆
Fuck yeah! Congrats Sara
Congratulations on your well deserved win!!! Wonderful haiku!
Congratulations!🥂💖