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PASSION

suffocating love

By Margaret BrennanPublished about 10 hours ago Updated about 9 hours ago 1 min read
PASSION
Photo by Hoi An and Da Nang Photographer on Unsplash

PASSION

My darling, hold me closer.

Let your heart beat next to mine.

I'll always be yours - heart and soul -

Until the end of time.

*

Let me feel your tender kisses

And your breath upon my cheek.

Alas! My heart is pounding and

My knees feel very weak.

*

I feel as though if I'm floating;

Hold me tighter, lest I fall;

My head is spinning wildly;

I can't feel my feet at all.

*

You're drawing breath away from me;

I can't find any air.

Kiss me just a little longer;

I can't breathe, but I don't care.

*

I feel the sweat bead on my brow;

There's a hunger in my soul.

The passion's overwhelming .. and

I've lost all self-control.

love poems

About the Creator

Margaret Brennan

I am a 78-year old grandmother who loves to write, fish, and grab my camera to capture the beautiful scenery I see around me.

My husband and I found our paradise in Punta Gorda Florida where the weather always keeps us guessing.

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  • Lana V Lynxabout 3 hours ago

    Beautiful poem, Margaret!

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